Comment: This sentence is attention-grabbing and personal. It draws the reader in with specificity ("exactly five times" and "best 50 dollars"), giving details on personal experience. It also sets an informal, relatable tone that invites further exploration of the author's perspective. Starting with something engaging and personal helps make the essay more memorable.

Comment: This sentence transitions smoothly from the personal anecdote to the deeper point about the film's cultural significance. It establishes a contrast between the film's flaws and qualities, especially concerning the central topic of the essay: diversity. The specific part of the sentence, "what makes Power Rangers unique" directly introduces the main theme of the essay without being overly direct or abrupt.

Comment: The following sentence highlights a clear and strong argument on the importance of representation in media and the film industry, effectively linking the essay to the chosen topic. It connects the author's opinion to the theme of diversity introduced in the previous sentence. More specifically, clearly stating the connection with the phrase "does just that" smoothly reminds the writer of the link between this example and the central argument, creating a sense of cohesion in the paragraph.