The student has effectively included relevant diagrams in the commentary, specifically an externalities diagram that accurately depicts the overconsumption of cigarettes in Indonesia and the impact of tax imposition. Both diagrams are labeled and accurate, without any mistakes or fallacies. However, the student has not consistently presented explanations alongside the diagrams, as the explanation for Diagram 2 is not linked in the work. It would have been beneficial for the student to clearly connect the explanation to Diagram 2 to enhance the clarity and relevance for the reader.
