The student has selected a relevant topic that analyzes individualism and the American Dream in Tim Burton's film *Big Fish*, which aligns well with the subject of the essay. The research question is formulated as a clear interrogative; however, it lacks specificity regarding the independent and dependent variables. The introduction effectively outlines the essay's purpose and connects it to cultural significance, but it fails to present the research question clearly as required. Additionally, the essay does not adequately describe the methodology or maintain an objective tone, incorporating personal reflections that detract from the analysis. Overall, while the topic is appropriate and the purpose is well-articulated, several areas require improvement for a stronger presentation.
