The student effectively incorporates relevant and appropriate source material throughout the essay, providing correct resources and outlining the studies used. The source material is predominantly from accredited scientific sources, and the student demonstrates a clear understanding of technical and subject-specific terms. Additionally, the tone and style of the essay maintain an academic and analytical level without being informal. However, there is a need for a clearer evaluation of the obtained evidence from empirical studies, particularly in relation to culture, ethics, gender, and methodology. The student should aim to provide a more balanced review of the studies present in the investigation.
