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Criterion A: The topic of the Internal assessment is stated clearly and explained in the introduction

Comment: The student clearly states the topic of the investigation which is to find suitable mathematical models for a chicken egg and comparing them, and further, calculating the volume and surface area of the egg from those models

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Criterion A: The introduction includes a general description of the student's approach to the topic and what area of the math curriculum the exploration focuses on

Comment: The student should include an outline of the exploration before the section on modeling the egg. The student should explain the mathematical concepts included in the investigation such as modeling the ellipse, using polynomials, etc.

Correct

Criterion A: The conclusion is a summary of the outcomes and a response to the aim of the exploration stated in the introduction

Comment: The conclusion should include a reference to two different models constructed by the student

Correct

Criterion A: The use of technology, when applied, is clearly indicated and explained

Comment: The use of the WolframAlpha calculator is justified

Correct

Criterion A: The use of technology, when applied, is clearly indicated and explained

Comment: The use of the WolframAlpha calculator is justified

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Criterion A: If analytical software is used, its purpose is described and the link to it is provided

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Criterion A: If analytical software is used, its purpose is described and the link to it is provided

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Criterion A: If analytical software is used, its purpose is described and the link to it is provided

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Criterion A: The graphs, tables, and diagrams are present in appropriate places (in the body paragraphs, after their descriptive introduction)

Comment: The graphs, and diagrams are present right next to their descriptions


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Criterion B: The graphs, tables, and diagrams are labeled (titled and numbered) at the bottom

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Criterion B: Key terms/variables are defined and explained when first introduced

Correct

Criterion B: Key terms/variables are defined and explained when first introduced

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Criterion B: The main concepts are described in the introduction

Comment: The introduction lacks a description of the used mathematics, therefore brief explanations of the main concepts applied are also missing from the introduction. The student should describe the subjects such as the volume, surface area, ellipse, interpolation, integration, etc. in the introduction. This would ensure that they understand the mathematical concepts well

Correct

Criterion B: Additional terms are defined in detail in appropriate places (dependent on the development of the exploration)

Comment: The student defines all of the terms correctly in the appropriate places

Correct

Criterion B: Additional terms are defined in detail in appropriate places (dependent on the development of the exploration)

Comment: The student defines all of the terms correctly in the appropriate places

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Criterion B: Additional terms are defined in detail in appropriate places (dependent on the development of the exploration)

Comment: The student defines all of the terms correctly in the appropriate places

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Criterion B: Additional terms are defined in detail in appropriate places (dependent on the development of the exploration)

Comment: The student defines all of the terms correctly in the appropriate places

Correct

Criterion B: Additional terms are defined in detail in appropriate places (dependent on the development of the exploration)

Comment: The student defines all of the terms correctly in the appropriate places

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment: Every formula is followed with a description

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Criterion B: The degree of accuracy is stated for any rounded values

Correct

Criterion B: The degree of accuracy is stated for any rounded values

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Criterion B: The degree of accuracy is stated for any rounded values

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Criterion B: The degree of accuracy is stated for any rounded values

Correct

Criterion B: Results are rounded only at the end of the calculations thread

Correct

Criterion B: The student used a deductive method and set out logical proofs where appropriate

Comment: The student sets out logical proofs in the exploration and describes them thoroughly

Correct

Criterion B: The student used a deductive method and set out logical proofs where appropriate

Comment: The student sets out logical proofs in the exploration and describes them thoroughly

Correct

Criterion B: The graphs, tables, and diagrams are labeled (titled and numbered) at the bottom

Correct

Criterion B: The graphs, tables, and diagrams are labeled (titled and numbered) at the bottom

Correct

Criterion B: The graphs, tables, and diagrams are labeled (titled and numbered) at the bottom


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Criterion A: The graphs, tables, and diagrams are present in appropriate places (in the body paragraphs, after their descriptive introduction)

Comment: The graphs, and diagrams are present right next to their descriptions

Correct

Criterion B: The graphs, tables, and diagrams are labeled (titled and numbered) at the bottom

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