The student has based their work on one of the 35 Prompts released by the IBO for the examination session, specifically the prompt "Can new knowledge change established values or beliefs?". The Exhibition consists of 3 objects with accompanying commentaries, ensuring that the total word count does not exceed 950 words. The 3 objects have been clearly identified and are all linked to the chosen prompt. However, the real-life context of each object is not clearly specified, and the objects chosen are generic rather than specific. Additionally, the student has not provided a clear explanation of the connection between the chosen prompt and each object, nor have they explained how each object contributes to the exploration of the prompt. It is also noted that there is irrelevant information incorporated in the Exhibition, such as unnecessary introductory paragraphs, which should be avoided as per the May 2023 TOK subject report.
