The student has effectively made the chosen title clear and apparent in the submission, placing it at the beginning of the document. The essay's focus is sustained on the title chosen, avoiding digression or irrelevant information. The student provides real-life or conceptual examples that are convincing and efficiently support the argument being made. Additionally, the essay is well-organized with an introductory paragraph, main body sections, and a concluding paragraph, and all external sources of information are appropriately acknowledged and referenced using an appropriate citing style. However, the work could be improved by effectively linking different Areas of Knowledge and by evaluating the different points of view and approaches towards the topic to add nuance to the arguments.
