The student has made the chosen title clear and apparent in their submission. However, the essay's focus is not sustained on the title, as the discussion diverts to faith and interpretation, which are off-topic. While the work is effectively linked with different Areas of Knowledge, the student fails to provide specific real-life or conceptual examples that support their argument efficiently. Additionally, the essay does not adequately consider implications or counterpoints, nor does it show awareness of different points of view related to the title. Although the essay is well-organized and all external sources are properly referenced, it lacks critical evaluation and remains overly descriptive at times.
