The student clearly presents the chosen title at the beginning of the essay and maintains a sustained focus on it throughout, avoiding digression and irrelevant information. The work effectively links different Areas of Knowledge, providing real-life and conceptual examples that convincingly support the arguments made. The student considers implications and counterpoints, demonstrating an awareness of different perspectives while evaluating the complexities of quantification in both the Human Sciences and the Arts. The essay is well-organized, featuring a clear structure with an introduction, body sections, and a conclusion, and all external sources are appropriately acknowledged and referenced. However, there is a noted need for the student to enhance the critical and argumentative elements of the essay to ensure it is not overly descriptive.
